SWIMMING MAYHEM!
Splash! I stroked my arms as fast as I could through the pounding water. Looking up I notice my sister right beside me, I strived further poking my head out of the water to realise I’m coming first. UNTIL….
She had flew straight past me, as she wins, I look to seek revenge in a rematch.
By Dallas
Hi Dallas. Love your descriptive writing. Made me feel like I was in the race as well.
ReplyDeleteHi Dallas. Loved your descriptive writing. It made me feel like I was in the race as well!
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