Monday, 17 March 2014

The Fall

The Fall
By Harvey Lye

“I can’t stop!” I quickly became scared. I jump over a stick... That was a massive speed gain. I knew nothing can become good of this. 
SMACK!! I don’t know how it happened but somehow I’m in pain... And lots of it. 
“OH MY GOD, Pete, call the ambulance!” Thank god dad brung the cellphone. 
“####, #### YOU DAD!!!”
“Shhh, Harvey it’s okay” mum says softly. 
“Mum I fell like this is a dream” 
“It’s okay Harvey, your just in a little bit of shock” 
I continue to scream curse words. I regret running up and down that big sketchy steep bank. In fact I regret going on this family walk. 
I think about what there going to do to me at the hospital then I ask- 
“Mum what are they going to do to me at the hospital?” 
“There just going to give you a few stitches.” 
“####, MUM WHY DID YOU TELL ME THAT?” 
After ages of waiting the ambulance and the culprit of my injury... Dad arrived. 
“What’s your name?” the ambulance driver man says. 
“Harvey.” 
“Okay it might sound a bit silly but all were going to do for now is put a bandage on it” 
Mum pops my leg up straight while the ambulance people rap my leg in the bandage. Then they put me on a stretcher. We go the way we came. Ahhh... My old enemies... Stairs. It was a rough ride but I finally made it. 

They put me into the back of the ambulance WEE OOO WEE OOO. Off we go to get my stitches. 

2 comments:

  1. Harvey, I enjoyed reading you writing. You really built the tension and had me feeling like it was me in that ambulance. Good writing buddy! Perry

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  2. Gripping stuff, Harv! Can't wait for the next instalment! Keep it up!

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