Wednesday, 5 March 2014

Erskine the Ancient Castle by Mathew Cranston



Erskine Wellington's best kept secret,
The sign hung on the old rusty gate.
Beyond the the gate,
A garden of darkness
The gate closed behind us,
The trees ached in the frosty pale wind,
An old news paper holding the secrets of the past,
An ancient archway smothered with vines,
An old basket ball court holding old paints,
Cracked walls covered with paintings,
Behind the vines an animals tomb,
We descend up the old stairs beholding an ancient castle,
Shattered windows and broken glass everywhere,
Down the old creepy road,
An old statue,  reaching out for eternity,
Behind the door the ancient spirit of the school,
"R.I.P Williams" were the words upon the ancient tomb,
As we departed the gate stood open.

Mathew Cranston 

8 comments:

  1. Great work! From Toby

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  2. We enjoyed reading it. Very mysterious. From Bridget (Fynn's Mum)

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  3. it was AWESOME! From D.V

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  4. I wish I could write like you.You should be proud matt!!!
    (EG)

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  5. LOL .from D.V

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  6. I wonder when did matt get so like an author or something? from D.V

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  7. Nice story
    Emily

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  8. Mathew I love your poem! That line, A garden of darkness, is a perfect description of Erskine College's spookiness...
    ~ Amy A

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